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Whoa

You are AWESOME at the guitar. 'Nuff said.

Clayton

Fine, just fine

This is a great song, I could really see it being used in an animation. But, I think that you didn't have a good enough drum-line, I wish that you would do something more, and take out the clap, and put in a snare.

Otherwise, great job.
Clayton

Simply Great

Every single aspect of this song is beautiful. You should really be SO proud of yourself. The only problem I had with this song is that there were too many false endings. You know, where you think the song is over but then it is not? Oh well. You did a pretty damn good job buddy.

I know my stuff isn't quite as good as yours, but I would be happy if you gave it a look-over.

Clayton

Pretty Damn Good

This song is incredibly easy to visualize in some sort of a romance animation, well done.

Be sure to check out some of my stuff.

Clayton

Bosa responds:

Indeed it is. Indeed.. it is..

OH MY GOD

HAHAHA

This was HILARIOUS

Great Job man!

Nostrap responds:

Thanks.

Sorry

Sorry i just didn't like it.

Harddrive100 responds:

Effort 1? Lol. It was more than a 1 for me at the time, when I was just starting off. I do agree that it's not too good, but if you're not going to have any CONSTRUCTIVE critisism, please don't review.

AMAZING

WOW! I LOVE this song! It has an amazing flow, nice melodies, and the guitar and the piano intertwine better than woven baskets. This is truly a classic.
I just have one question though, what did you use to record this? I'm in desperate search for a way to record my music with clarity.

thank you so much, and keep it up!
Clayton

This, is great

I am a HUGE fan of Debussy, I love that jazzy-classical style of music; especially this song. This song sounds pretty original, but I don't think that it is long enough personally. There were some great thoughts, but you need to elaborate a little more - if you know what I mean. I'm not saying that it's not good how it is, i would just prefer a little more, that's all.

But otherwise, great work. I've listened to a lot of your other stuff, and have to admit, you have to have a lot of talent to compose with such variety, as you have.

Clayton

WinTang responds:

Thanks for your review!

I disagree on the length... but that's probably because it was made in a context. I did a performance and had to have a short piece of about a minute, in three parts:
- Preparing to leave a place where you don't belong
- The exit itself (the 'swipe' part)
- Disappearing into the place where you do belong (the fading chords at the end)

If I ever write a sonata or something, I might include this though, and then it would have to be a bit longer.

And thanks for the compliment in the last paragraph. It's always good to find some mutual respect here!

Cheers!

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