Whoa
You are AWESOME at the guitar. 'Nuff said.
Clayton
Whoa
You are AWESOME at the guitar. 'Nuff said.
Clayton
Fine, just fine
This is a great song, I could really see it being used in an animation. But, I think that you didn't have a good enough drum-line, I wish that you would do something more, and take out the clap, and put in a snare.
Otherwise, great job.
Clayton
Simply Great
Every single aspect of this song is beautiful. You should really be SO proud of yourself. The only problem I had with this song is that there were too many false endings. You know, where you think the song is over but then it is not? Oh well. You did a pretty damn good job buddy.
I know my stuff isn't quite as good as yours, but I would be happy if you gave it a look-over.
Clayton
Pretty Damn Good
This song is incredibly easy to visualize in some sort of a romance animation, well done.
Be sure to check out some of my stuff.
Clayton
Indeed it is. Indeed.. it is..
OH MY GOD
HAHAHA
This was HILARIOUS
Great Job man!
Thanks.
Sorry
Sorry i just didn't like it.
Effort 1? Lol. It was more than a 1 for me at the time, when I was just starting off. I do agree that it's not too good, but if you're not going to have any CONSTRUCTIVE critisism, please don't review.
AMAZING
WOW! I LOVE this song! It has an amazing flow, nice melodies, and the guitar and the piano intertwine better than woven baskets. This is truly a classic.
I just have one question though, what did you use to record this? I'm in desperate search for a way to record my music with clarity.
thank you so much, and keep it up!
Clayton
This, is great
I am a HUGE fan of Debussy, I love that jazzy-classical style of music; especially this song. This song sounds pretty original, but I don't think that it is long enough personally. There were some great thoughts, but you need to elaborate a little more - if you know what I mean. I'm not saying that it's not good how it is, i would just prefer a little more, that's all.
But otherwise, great work. I've listened to a lot of your other stuff, and have to admit, you have to have a lot of talent to compose with such variety, as you have.
Clayton
Thanks for your review!
I disagree on the length... but that's probably because it was made in a context. I did a performance and had to have a short piece of about a minute, in three parts:
- Preparing to leave a place where you don't belong
- The exit itself (the 'swipe' part)
- Disappearing into the place where you do belong (the fading chords at the end)
If I ever write a sonata or something, I might include this though, and then it would have to be a bit longer.
And thanks for the compliment in the last paragraph. It's always good to find some mutual respect here!
Cheers!
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