Score: 7

"Pretty Good for a First Flash"

submission: Magic Tetris Ride

date: November 10, 2006

Good Job with this!
The only thing that bothered me about it was some of the scenes were dragged on a little bit.
Whatever though, it was still funny.
4/5
Clayton

Score: 6

"Maybe.... Just Maybe...."

submission: 38 1/2 Ways to Kill a...

date: November 4, 2006

You DESPERATELY need sound, man.

Score: 9

"You've got quite the imagination"

submission: Dreams Chapter One

date: November 4, 2006

Yes, you do.
Good Job with this:
The art was AMAZING.
The music suited every scene,
The actionscript was just too complex for me to even BEGIN thinking about:P
The storyline was nothing less than brilliant.

I wonder why it has such a low score though?

Clayton

Score: 9

"Very heartfelt"

submission: Ode To Angels (Renewed)

date: October 27, 2006

This song had a lot of interesting aspects to it:
The first thing I noticed was how the final chord is different than the first one, I just thought that was kind of cool:D

I loved how after the first segment, you went into the minor progression; You had the minor, went down a tone to a moajor chord, and then ANOTHER tone down to a maj7, I LOVE THAT PROGRESSION! It's so sweet and gentle, I have used it MANY times in my music, and I know how useful it can be, so extra points simply for using that.

Just when I thought it was over, you surpised me with a little gentle piano at the end. It was very sweet and soft.

I liked how you didn't use any percussion in this song either, it really brings out the piano.

My ONLY concern about this work is that it didn't really remind me of angels, some of the tones seemed a little harsh.

Great Job with this, and I look forward to hearing more of your songs!

Clayton

(If you listen to my song, "Arlulu", you might find that it is similar to some of your songs, only a little sadder:("

Score: 9

"Good, but a little bland"

submission: Drowning Sunset

date: October 27, 2006

Hey, I really liked this.
Everything was great, except for one thing.
My only problem with this piece is lacking of melody. You had a great base line, but the treble side of the song didn't really have a melody, it just sort of played the chords that the base needed.
Also, it didn't really sound like it had that much feeling in it:(

I really liked the chord progression, but SOMETIMES, the constant use of maj7 chords can be a little awkward if they are repeatitive, so keep that in mind for your next piece.

I will be keeping a close eye on your audio page for more of your songs though, I like them!:D

Clayton

Score: 8

"Awesome"

submission: Time for Bed - vocal edit

date: October 18, 2006

Hey, not much can really be said except great job...
Just to help me out though, what exactly do the lyrics say? Like what is the general sense of it?